Thursday, July 11, 2013

Last Day of Term Tomorrow

Another term nearly over - I think the cold weather has made it seem quite a long term but actually it's shorter than the first one!

We're coming to an end of our Poetry study, also Book Reports and 'Disasters' Social Studies work. Mr Thomas has got a lovely big end of unit test for us tomorrow - YAY!?!

Here's a few of our recent poems, inspired by Jenny Powell-Chalmers 'Carnival of Chocolate' - poems with Dunedin and Otago at their heart.

Otago Harbour

Splish splosh splash
Goes the white caps in the water
Chug chug chug
Goes the boat in the ocean

The ocean held me in its grasp
The Dunedin harbour’s waves were as big as a dinosaur
People wish for the taste of fish

The Monarch takes people out for a float
The people love to see the sights
Right before their very eyes

The ocean is blue.


by KD, LG & KM


The Beach

Dive in, dive in
To the waves that come and go
Wherever they end up, we do not know
Anything can wash up, revealing the sea's secrets
And unlocking the mysteries

The waves are like white horses running towards the shore
The water reflects the sky perfectly
Jagged cliffs line the beach's barrier
Formed because of the constant crash of white waves

Splash, splash
Squawking birds touch the water's surface while gliding across the sky
Getting a bird's eye view of the swimming sealions
The high tide is now in session, taking away the treasures of the beach
Taking them back
Never to be seen again

by PM & CS
Greedy
 
Gorse was never a weed
We let it spread
Like this, greed takes over us, kills 
Our Pride

by SM
Water Front Fish Tank

Step in, step in
To the Forsyth Barr Stadium
The waterfront fish tank
House of the bone-crunching Highlanders and the Big O's
30 000 fans supporting our mighty, magnificent Otago teams

Yum, yum
I see food everywhere
It's as delicious as candy floss
Chips, drinks and chocolate fish
All the delights you could ever wish

Watch intently or you might miss the action
Cameras everywhere, even on the segways
Rushing up and down the sidelines
They are as fast as cheetahs

Step out, step out
All the fun is done
They've finished now
A huge thud as they win the game
It is finished now - it's the end.

by RW & ED

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